My friend Sean suggested I change the pacing of one of my jokes on page 21. I'd be upset if he wasn't right. In fact, the suggestion was something that I was toying about doing myself. I expanded one joke, and finished off with a cut line from an original draft.
All of this makes little sense, I'm sure, since I'm not showing the page. But it gives you an idea of how this process works. And will work over the next two pages until this bad boy is done. Man, am I looking forward to that.
So, now, our heroes are back on Earth. Why's the Crusader flying from an aircraft carrier? What adventure did he just have. Even I don't know. Make your own story.